Persuasive+writing

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__ //**Product review**// __
Apples (computer) are a lot dearer to buy and run then a pc. Why are apples dearer to run then pc. Well the software is dearer to buy so if you want to upgrade your software you have to pay more. There is a lot less people to fix which makes it dearer to get it fixed and harder.

Pc on the other hand are a lot cheaper to buy and run there are more people to fix them and have more games and programs. And better internet.

Then you get in to laptops. Apple laptops are a lot smaller but are a lot lot more expensive and a lot easier to lose or break if you drop it or put in cupid

By the way this is my first piece of Persuasive writing

The thing I liked about this is I got to write a piece of persuasive writing about what ever I wanted to.

My goal is to write a bit more School should start at 10 am because you might need to get some thing from a shop but most shops open at 9 am so you would have to be late if you had to get what you wanted for school or you might get in trouble. If school started at 10am you could sleep in, stay up later or get up at the same time to watch TV because if you went to bed at 10pm and wake up at 7am now you could go to bed at 11am and wake up at 8pm and still get 9 hours sleep or you could sleep in and get 10 hours sleep or you can get up at the same time and watch TV for an hour or just have a big long breakfast or play with your pet if you have one. You would be less tide for school and so would the teachers because you would sleep longer which would give you more energy so you are not as tide and you can do more running as you will have more energy which is better for you as you will be running more Say school finished at 2pm you could do heaps more stuff like go to the pools shop and a friend’s house or a bike ride with your friends which will keep you fit and healthy because you are biking swimming and walking. Say you do some thing like a paper run and you need to go to the bank you have time to before the bank closes because the bank is not open in the weekend. But you would have to take out morning tea so you would at least have 3 hours of learning or you could make lunch ½ an hour or do both. But even if you did both you would still only have 3 and a ½ hours of learning when you get 4 hours of learning but that’s only ½ an hour when you think about it. When you think about it your parents work might start at 9am and finish at 3pm so you might need to wait at school for 2hours in steed of 1 hour or 1 hour in steed of ½ an hour which is a long time to be waiting out side a school. Say you’re a teacher you would be paid less because you do not work as long and with the prize of every think going up teachers would struggle to pay for things after a wile and change jobs or run out of money and there would be no school after a wile because there would be no teachers.
 * //__ School should start at 10 am instead of 8:45am and finish at 2 pm instead of 3pm __//**

I did my goal and wrote more